This[usage-this]

This。代词this若指代前一句或子句的完整意思,未必总能承担这一重负,因而可能产生不精确的表述。

  • 误:Visiting dignitaries watched yesterday as ground was broken for the new high-energy physics laboratory with a blowout safety wall. This is the first visible evidence of the university's plans for modernization and expansion.
  • 正:Visiting dignitaries watched yesterday as ground was broken for the new high-energy physics laboratory with a blowout safety wall. The ceremony afforded the first visible evidence of the university's plans for modernization and expansion.

在上面左栏的例子中,this并不能立即说明什么是"第一项可见的证据"。