He is a man who[usage-he-is-a-man-who]

He is a man who。一种常见的冗余表达；见规则17。

• 误：He is a man who is very ambitious.
• 正：He is very ambitious.

• 误：Vermont is a state that attracts visitors because of its winter sports.
• 正：Vermont attracts visitors because of its winter sports.