规则19 用相似的形式表达并列的思想[rule-19]
这一原理,即平行结构原理,要求内容与功能相似的表达在外形上也相似。形式的相似使读者更容易识别内容与功能的相似。人们熟悉的《八福》就例证了平行结构的长处。
Blessed are the poor in spirit: for theirs is the kingdom of heaven. Blessed are they that mourn: for they shall be comforted. Blessed are the meek: for they shall inherit the earth. Blessed are they which do hunger and thirst after righteousness: for they shall be filled.
不熟练的写作者常常违反这一原理,错误地相信不断改变表达形式有价值。当重复一个陈述以强调它时,写作者可能需要改变其形式。除此之外,写作者应遵循平行结构原理。
- 误:Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method, while now the laboratory method is employed.
- 正:Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method; now it is taught by the laboratory method.
左边那种写法给人印象是写作者犹豫不决或胆怯,似乎没有能力或不敢选定一种表达形式并坚持下去。右边那种写法表明写作者至少做出了选择并坚持了它。
按照这一原理,适用于一个系列中所有成员的冠词或介词,要么只在第一个词项前使用,要么在每个词项前重复。
- 误:the French, the Italians, Spanish, and Portuguese
- 正:the French, the Italians, the Spanish, and the Portuguese
- 误:in spring, summer, or in winter
- 正:in spring, summer, or winter (in spring, in summer, or in winter)
有些词在某些习惯用法中需要搭配特定的介词。当这类词被组合进一个复合结构时,必须把所有适当的介词都包括进去,除非它们相同。
- 误:His speech was marked by disagreement and scorn for his opponent's position.
- 正:His speech was marked by disagreement with and scorn for his opponent's position.
关联表达(both, and;not, but;not only, but also;either, or;first, second, third;等等)后面应跟相同的语法结构。违反这条规则的许多情况都可以通过重新安排句子来纠正。
- 误:It was both a long ceremony and very tedious.
- 正:The ceremony was both long and tedious.
- 误:A time not for words but action.
- 正:A time not for words but for action.
- 误:Either you must grant his request or incur his ill will.
- 正:You must either grant his request or incur his ill will.
- 误:My objections are, first, the injustice of the measure; second, that it is unconstitutional.
- 正:My objections are, first, that the measure is unjust; second, that it is unconstitutional.
也许会有人问:如果你需要表达相当多——比如二十个——相似的想法,该怎么办?难道你必须写出二十个同型的连续句子吗?仔细考察之后,你很可能会发现这个困难是想象出来的——这二十个想法可以归类分组,你只需在每组之内运用这一原理。否则,最好用表格的形式来陈述,以避开这一困难。