规则15 用肯定形式表述[rule-15]
做出明确的断言。避免平淡、苍白、犹豫、不置可否的语言。把not这个词用作否定或对照的手段,绝不要用作回避的手段。
- 误:He was not very often on time.
- 正:He usually came late.
- 误:She did not think that studying Latin was a sensible way to use one's time.
- 正:She thought the study of Latin a waste of time.
- 误:The Taming of the Shrew is rather weak in spots. Shakespeare does not portray Katharine as a very admirable character, nor does Bianca remain long in memory as an important character in Shakespeare's works.
- 正:The women in The Taming of the Shrew are unattractive. Katharine is disagreeable, Bianca insignificant.
最后一个例子在修改之前,既含混又是否定的。因此,修改后的版本其实只是对写作者意图的一种猜测。
三个例子都显示了not这个词固有的弱点。读者无论有意还是无意,都不满足于只被告知不是什么;读者希望被告知是什么。因此,一般说来,即使是否定,也最好用肯定形式来表达。
- not honest — dishonest
- not important — trifling
- did not remember — forgot
- did not pay any attention to — ignored
- did not have much confidence in — distrusted
把否定与肯定对置,能形成更强的结构。
Not charity, but simple justice. Not that I loved Caesar less, but that I loved Rome more. Ask not what your country can do for you—ask what you can do for your country.
除not之外的否定词通常很有力。
Her loveliness I never knew / Until she smiled on me.
用不必要的助动词或条件词加以限定的陈述,听起来优柔寡断。
- 误:If you would let us know the time of your arrival, we would be happy to arrange your transportation from the airport.
- 正:If you will let us know the time of your arrival, we shall be happy to arrange your transportation from the airport.
- 误:Applicants can make a good impression by being neat and punctual.
- 正:Applicants will make a good impression if they are neat and punctual.
- 误:Plath may be ranked among those modern poets who died young.
- 正:Plath was one of those modern poets who died young.
如果你每一个句子都带有疑问,你的写作就会缺乏权威。把助动词would、should、could、may、might和can留到真正存在不确定性的场合使用。